offspringscott's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Horrific Toaster Accident]

nice one!

I love the end! loll...
a bit short though (just like my review, I don't have any bad comment to do)

I love the absurdity!

[Apples in the Tree]

awesome!

the graphs, every little details, the ambiance.. every thing is awsome...

'got few little things to say though (nothing that matters that much)

why can't you jump LEFT holding space?... kinda strange glitch....

and sometimes, when you touche floor, your "y" is kinda shakin'. it depends on the position you had when you first touch the ground and/or on the speed you had when you touched it.

globally, the game's awesome!

[IFAD -Italy for a dreamer]

the key IS library?

awesome 3d effects!

there's a locker cut in half though...
and I don't really like to open the navigation bar every time I wanna move.
the text that was suppose to appear for the monitor appeared for the moka....
there's items you can pull/push several times...
I would've like to use the towels by myself.
every items were useless (unless the to find a useless key)

I loved to mess up the room!

7 for super realistic graphics (I didn't hear the sounds, so I can't judge it)

[Back Home (little prince)]

nice one

even if it's short, it's hard

[Coaster Racer]

congratulation longanimals and biscuitlocker!

you both did an amazing job

[Birthday my dad]

nice but short

is that it?... once I found the cake...it's over? I mean, you made ALL this and now all you have to do is to copy/paste your level, edit it and add enemies or any difficulty... that'd be good

anyway... 8 for the engine and graphic

DirtyPanDa responds:

haha I am not nerdy enough to know how to make enemies and all that :P
I wish I was but I am still learning. This is second time I made a game so it will all come soon.
I want to make this game huge with enemies, obstacles and a story and than better animated and my dad not in a wheelchair so he can kick and punch :P

[Legend of The Stick Demo]

bad A.S.

you should might have a variable (that I'd call yspeed) that affects the _y:
_y + = yspeed;//must be onEnterFrame

and instead of writing
_y - = ...//(or _y = _y - ...)
when key UP isdown you should write
yspeed = - ...
(but ONLY when he hits the ground and the key UP isDown)

and add gravity (yspeed + = ...)

if he touches the ground, (on the mc ground)
character._y = this._y;//MovieClip must be well placed
character.yspeed=0

if I am clear enough, your character won't fly like a bird , and he won't pass through the ground like ghost, 'hope you're using as2 cause I don't understand a thing of as3...

dlyda responds:

thx for help but im using flash 8 and will it work for there. Also i wanted to test it and changed plans to let you guys test it because in my flash its ays i cant test it because my computer may become irresponsible(bad spelling).